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The sunset on lover's beach

As I stand here on your beach
and think for all with we've been and done

I turn my head to the left and remember the pinic we once had
you laughing, me smiling and the dog (of course) eating

The sand grains now fall through my fingers
like the time we spent together

I turn my head to the right and see you kissing me
and then the dog pounding over to join in!

I watch the waves fall upon the golden sand and
recall the time of you dancing merrily in that freezing cold sea

I look towards the glowing setting sun
and see what all the memories we shared
I'll hold them and you in my heart till
Mr. Death comes knocking, so i can be with you once more

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    August 8

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    Thank you for your lovely entry, good luck in my contest, Josie

  • groovy afternoon
    July 18
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    a nice write this. Good luck


  • Antebellum
    July 10

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    'The sand grains now fall through my fingers
    like the time we spent together'


    very strong write.
    thanks for sharing


  • Antebellum
    July 10
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    'The sand grains now fall through my fingers
    like the time we spent together'


    very strong write.
    thanks for sharing


  • XxForeverFaithfulxX
    June 13

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    It is so sad but so full of love and happiness. This was beautiful and I love it. Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest.

    ~Kayla


  • Spiritual Soul
    May 23

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    Aww this is sad but I liked it. You wrote of these memories beautifully, almost as if they were happening again. Beautiful write, thanks for entering my contest!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~

  • abmsem
    April 19

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    'The sand grains now fall through my fingers
    like the time we spent together'

    These lines are so powerful and emotive. I really can relate. I love the way you talk about the dog, I can tell this is a personal memory and you write about it wonderfully. Thanks for the entry and good luck


  • AshesFromFire
    April 15

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    Losing love....the hardest tourtur that the human body can live through. I know these feelings all to well. Most certainly touched my heart. Well done. Good luck in my contest.


  • BrokenSanity
    April 14

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    Ahh, But we both know what you mean here...

    A powerful, heartfelt poem here, my love. It brought tears to my eyes. Thank you.

    Will xxx


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 13

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    Mr. death come knocking, so I can be with you? Thats different but I loved the rst of your poem. It is a really good write.

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