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You

As feelings grow like you say they do, then why don’t you love me like you use to?  My feelings for you won’t ever change, it is an amazing feeling and so very strange.

I love everything in this world that you do, you picked me way up when I’m feeling blue, no questions about it I know that its true, there wont be another bout quite like you.

Your smile and jokes tickles and pokes, you gave me a smile where I couldn’t feel for the longest while. I want our relationship to always last, you helped me forget my painful and crazy past.

I feel really lonely but only when you are gone, because when we are together we have so much fun.

When I close my eyes you are all I see, that is how I know that you are apart of me.  I love you so much that words can not explain, your smile is my pleasure and your frown is my pain.

I just think about your smile the way your voice sounds, it perks me right up and gets rid of my downs, and that is what our relationship is defiantly about.

This I know is true, because this is all that happens when I think of you.

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  • loche
    April 22
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    Nice

    You sound almost familiar with your writing style. I like it.

  • *(^_^)*

    OMG i love this poem and i hope you make more caz i just love them