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not shore

Missing image

 

 

 

 

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she was black and white
with blue dreams,
blue hopes and



blue curves,
twisted and laced
with elation

 

 

 

 

 

 

 ii

 

 

she imagined
it would only take
a scratch of curiosity
to reveal
a silken peach shore
beneath
the crashing waves
of lycra

 

 

 

 

 

iii

 

 

she loved the
thrill of uncertainty

 

 

 

 

 

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  • A Prophet of 3 gold member
    June 10
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    fuck ... (my highest compliment)


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    May 2

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    This is fabulous. I love the metaphors in this and the unknown quantity of having nothing confirmed! Best to you in the contest

  • Topnotchsy
    April 29

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    Your vignettes are as good as any I have read on this site, and these are no different. Great stuff!!


  • KelsiEvermore
    April 20

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    I liked this a lot! Thanks for entering and good luck!
    My favorite parts:
    blue curves,
    twisted and laced
    with elation
    and
    she loved the
    thrill of uncertainty


  • sweet arrival gold member
    April 13

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    love this... as you know. i think i might use the word love in your comments more than any others... amazing write.


  • Dalaney gold member
    April 13

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    ha! God...you do it everytime...you give me

    that zing I want in poetry, and I adore you for it

     

    love, lane

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