he sees her
like a deep rooted oak
that shades small faces
from tired, sorrowful skies
as passion coloured foreheads
rest on intimacy
she opens her eyes
with the same knowing
as when he opened his
to her.
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This is really beautiful. Such a sweet and loving
moment to look into each others eyes is indeed
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Wow, Your description is amazing. I could honestly imagine 2 people looking at eachother, Nothing on thioer minds but the other person. This is a beautiful peom, Very simple, Yet it had great impact. Keep it up =]
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WOW! This is simply beautiful. It is so calm and the flow of this is absolutely amazing. The picture you wrote this on was a rose and that would have been hard to bring out a poem that was not cliche. You pulled it off so wonderfully. I love. Great Job and keep on writing.
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i love your writing... it's like there are times you take my thoughts and pen them how i would want to. this is breathtaking and hopeful. love it.
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This is beautiful.
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