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Worried

I'm worried about him
I've never seen him so grim
I need to find some way to help
But alas, I'm nothing but a welp

I don't like seeing him like this
Moving around inside an everchanging abyss
I know I'd do anything for him
Even if it can make my future grim

I care about him more than myself
I'm not sure if he knows that himself
I don't want to see him cry
I don't want to see him.....die

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  • TheJuggaloKing
    April 13

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    Hey dude I know don't be so worried I'll be alright I've been through tougher times than this and pulled through you just need to keep your head up ok..........


    • Wynd Arc
      April 13
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      Ok, I'll keep my head up but that doesn't mean that I'm not gonna just stop worrying altogether. You know me better than that... Just so long as you're ok, I'll be ok. Ttyl big bro.
      ~Kai the Decendant of Haids~


  • JustSam
    April 13
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    I agree with alicia's question.. who is this about?? but its really good and i like the rhyme! =]


  • Toxic Stardust
    April 13

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    who is this about??? like I need to be more worried as it is though...lol...good poem though...
    Alicia Lynn