The noble personality, the great man indeed,
My Father clothed me, he did feed,
Throughout my life, till mid-thirties,
Removed all my worries, he, the tender breeze!
Never felt I loneliness throughout these years,
His shelter protected me from fears,
When time arrived when I should have served
Him, he departed to heavens, the brave, steel-nerved!
His smiles were sweeter than ringing bells,
His voice served as magic spells,
His manners polite, his sophisticated way,
Like fragrant flowers start their sway!
My father was great, matchless, no qualm,
He regularly prayed and distributed alms,
To the deserving, poor and needy,
In helping others, was swift and speedy!
I missed my father, the noble soul,
In my upbringing, pivotal was his role!
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This beautiful poem reminds me the great feelings of love you have for your father -
I no how you feel the loss of a love one is hard. Whn I lost my dad I felt so motionally upset. I didn't want to believe he was gone. I wasn't allowed to attend the funeral either.
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Thank you
Thank you very very much for your kind appreciation dear Lamb -
Many thanks
many thanks respected Mujtaba for your lovely comments -
Thank you!
Thank you very much my dear friend Golden Eyed for your kind words; I am also unable to believe that he is no more in the world. May his noble soul rest in eternal peace, I pray (aamen) -
My Dear
Dear Mujtaba!
Your poem shows your great love for your dear father; I am sure he will be in heaven and god will shower His mercies upon him.
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Pathetic
The death of father is an unbearable loss and tears remain flowing in his memories..... great poem my friend
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Many thanks
Many thanks dear Dancing Doll for your kindness and love!
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