En profondeur, mon âme, retenti en douleur.
Battement calmant froid, veine silencieuse.
Échos exquis, agonie passionnante
Comme une moth dans la flamme, ce feu dans moi
Mon coeur flamboyant, libre!
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Passion liquide, versant à la poussière,
la libératrice des vampires perdus,
pour la volonté, pour la lust.
Libérez-moi!
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Il J'ai fait ma cause, et elle me consommera.
Mon amour,
liez-moi à votre âme,
me punissent avec le péage de plaisirs
chair sur chair
percez-moi avec du votre acier,
je suis…
donc, je me sens
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Author notes
My Vampyre
In depth, my soul, crying forth it's pain,
cold stilling beat, silenced in vein
exquisite echos, enthralling anguish
like a moth in the flame, this fire in me...
...my burning heart, free...
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Liquid passion, pouring forth dust
Liberator of lost vampyres
for the will, for the lust
Liberate me!
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I have made it my cause, and it consumes me,
...like love.
Bind me to your heart,
punish me with the toll of pleasures
flesh on flesh
tear me with your steel,
I am…
therefore, I feel
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Tres Bien!
French is such a beautiful language for this type of poem <3
I love how this is written.
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20.11 / 25
Just so you know for future reference, most on this site are English speaking, so it'd be nice for the reader to be able to come across the English piece posted rather than the French. No one's going to waste their time scrolling down to read the translation because why should we have to? Posting it in the AN is a lazy way of saying, I don't care, I hate you readers. It doesn't do your writing any justice because it's a marvelous piece. -
Nicely done vampire poem, not one of the gruesome ones.
Well written. Thank you for entering the "Fight for the Gold" contest it is appreciated. Best of luck to you..
Scott
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Very amazing poem. I love to read different languages. Excellent work and very provocative. Excellent work. Thanks for sharing. kahy
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Wow! Very powerful!
A very powerful write, quite bowls one over (like the steel of that vampire). Such strong language sets a wonderful tone: Take me, please! It very much creates a powerful, passionate plea...
Great piece!
I wish I could read the French, though.
"crying forth it's pain," -> its
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Parles-tu francais? Moi je parle francais un peu.
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no, a french ghost channels poems through me 
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wow, this is amazing. thx for the translation, without it all i would have gotten was the jist of it. lol. great write.
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Wow!
That was hot! Great to see you writing again, young poet. This was a superb take inside the life of a vampire. Good one.
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Nice Author's Notes.
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This is a very beautiful write! You are a really great writer thank you so much for entering and good luck!!!
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