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It Hurts

Its digging in
Pressing deeper now
I think I'm dying
I do't know how
To stop this pain
Blood doesn't always signify
Displeasure
Scream my name
And other things
I swear
These Prayers
Won't go unanswered.

-Andi

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  • Flight of Dragons
    April 13

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    Sad and vengeful-my type of poem. Great work! . . . . .um you might want to stick the 'n' back into the "do't"