I stand on the rings of the sun,
and I saw such spectacular view
and in such a glance I conclude
I must live here with you.
In here you'll tell me sweet nothings,
of how these green grasses caress,
that I may feel your touch succumb my core,
and that your presence would be whole.
I saw that loving face on the sky,
white clouds tracing your hair,
I reach out my hand as if touching,
lovingly, as I feel your body on me again.
Make me wish no more,
that I may be here with you forever,
take my hand then put me beside you,
cause I will hold on here, until forever comes true.
A contest entry
- "take me to this place" by JinSays.
539 points, ended April 13, 26 entries
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Comments
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This is very sweet. I thank you for taking the time to write for my contest, and I wish you all the best.
Love,
jin
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