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grace. (Snapshot II)

sarah,
delicate features tense,
sparkling blue eyes riveted
on something only she can see—

toe collides with plastic
and she manages to fall upwards

a slight grin, an embarrassed flush on star-washed cheeks
and she is on her way,

but that place will be forever hers.

Author notes

Told you, Sarah. I told you. MUAHAHA.
(Seriously, the girl is much more awesome than she gives herself credit for...)

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  • awww, sarah is such a doll.
    sarah, you're such a doll.

    she needs to realize how wonderful she iss. :]

    this is so sweet emily. :]

    • She does. We need to kidnap her and brainwash her into knowing that she's brilliance on wheels. -nodnodnod-
      Thankies!


  • trekkergirl
    April 30

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    hummm am jealous... this is suppose to be my birthday and anniversary. No really just joking thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for enteirng it into my contest.

    • Heehees. I'm sorry; it's odd for me to write happy poetry and all the prompts in the world can't really control it when I try... >.<
      -gives jelly babies-


  • Rashida
    April 13

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    My goodness, crazy sister, this Sarah person must be awful special to hold so much of your attention! She does seem to inspire some fantastic things from you!

  • "toe collides with plastic
    and she manages to fall upwards"

    that was really cool and interesting.

    goodluck .


  • decode
    April 13
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    *giggles*
    I like this a lot.
    you're sweet. <3

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