Flowering empathy,
...Bloom
My beautiful one,
Run!
Have you not heard?
(Jealousy raped Vanity!)
Their child
That child Envy!
She searches for you
…With scissors
Author notes
M i c h a e l P
A contest entry
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Comments
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Whoa~
Now this is One Powerful Image
and the Message tugs hard~
and deep too
The last two lines~
Oy~ packs a punch
The Metaphor~ takes the Reader there...
Wow~
Bravo!
Keep that quill & Mind dancing
Thank You for sharing Your Voice & Talent
Best wishes in the contest Sweet Soul~
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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Hahaha. Jealousy raped vanity, eh? Funny stuff there.
THis is awesome. Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck to you. -
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ha =)
witty, vivid, original And portrayed with such few words
you made it seem effortless
though a powerful poem
I liked xx
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thank you...peace
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Profoundly Inspirational!!
I love it!! Best of luck in the contest!! 
Peace,
Cyn
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liked the images one gets when reading these lines - good flow and great thoughts shared. Fitting ending - makes one thingk about consequences of one's actions.
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Flowering empathy,
...Bloom
Run my beautiful one,
Run!
Have you not heard?
(Jealousy raped Vanity!)
Love it all but especially the beginning. Thanks so much for entering into my contest and giving me the oppurtunity to read it. Good luck!
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HEHE
I like this, brevity is a plus if you can pull it off... Great job, I like the form and I like your style. Thanks and best of luck in the contest!
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thyank you
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Show not tell. I didn't really connect to it, and thought it could have used a bit more.
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ooo!
This is good,
I very much have enjoyed
this read,
it's powerful and very bold...
intriguing and yet brief!
Some clappies for yer very clever, indeed!
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thank you-glad you enjoyed this...peace
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"Run!
Have you not heard?
(Jealousy raped Vanity!)"
What an intense little snippet!!!
Well done and all the best to you with this.
Ken -
Wow! Powerful words, written very creatively. How are you doing Michael? I haven't commented or talked to you in a really long time! I hope you're well
This was great!
Blessings,
~Michaela~
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woh.
very powerful write.
thanks for taking the time to enter.
best of luck. -
Acidic
WAH HAY! THIS IS BRIEF,BUT POWERFUL.bEST OF LUCK IN MY CONTEST.THIS ANGST WRITTEN PIECE IS VERY,VERY SHOCKING,BUT ALSO SO VERY VERY GREAT. -
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WOW!
short and very profound!
Best of luck!
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Oh, now this is keen! Very clever and emotive. I just love that ending... destructive indeed! Wonderfully done!
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thank you Ten, I really liked the way this one came out(almost poetic)...peace
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wow - great images and emotion in just a few lines! Well done!
loved your last line - perfect! *grin8
thank you for your entry
best wishes
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ack Michael make her put those scissors down!!
lol Michael I loved this from you scary.
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Hi there I liked this rather short but none the less a great piece that you have penned thank you for taking the time to come out in support our contest.
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This is short and wicked!
Wicked is a good word with me! Being a "minimalist" myself, I appreciate so much being said in so few words!
Thanks for supporting our contests! Best wishes now and always!
Write on!
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