Age 8. So young
so innocent. Raised
to obey my elders. I
did just that.
I did and look
what happened.
I was molested.
And raped. So young
I did as I was told.
8 years pass by.
Now 15 things stop.
A question runs in my
mind. Did I deserve this?
My answer along with others
NO!!
But to this day
at 17 I still wonder
Did I deserve this?
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Comments
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No
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no
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you did not and never will diserve sexual abuse it is sometihng people with cerupted minds do to get satisfaction and tht is not your fault hun
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You never deserve that some people are just sick I was raped as a child then again as an adult I can really relate to you. Don't let other people mistakes ruin the rest of your life get mad if you have too.
The Positives:
I really could feel your pain and confusion it really got to me
The Negatives:
Nothing that I see great job
My Favorite Part:
I did and look
what happened.
I was molested.
And raped. So young
I did as I was told.
8 years pass by.
Now 15 things stop.
A question runs in my
mind. Did I deserve this?
My answer along with others
NO!!
This was so wonderful you did an excellent job!
Overall:
I give this an 9/10 you did great. I hope to see you in my future contests thanks so much for entering.
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Thanks soo much for the comment.
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no one deserves that, I'm so sorry this happened to you. this poem drips with painful emotion and I really like that.
goodluck and thanks for entering
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no sweetone...
you didnt n im sorry you went thro it -
Very good way of telling your story and getting it out. Those feelings are what most have when abused. It is not your fault and I hope those responsible are punished to the fullest.
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no one deserves that...
espeacially u
great write -
ofcourse not..im sorry this happened to you.
a very real but sickening truth in this write.
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