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PET ISLAND (for VERY KINKY ADULTS ONLY!)

PET ISLAND (c) Copyright 2009 by Earl F. Hubbard Jr.
(from A NAUGHTY PET'S JOURNAL TOO coming SOON!)

I made it to Pet Island,
in just  the nick of time.
MiSS LILY was ecstatic,
to listen to my rhyme -

about the way I met her,
at a kinky Bridal Shower,
and the way I drank the dew,
from her bud and lovely flower.

She told me to continue,
to tell my rhythmic tale,
to all The Evil Wenches,
or she'd lock me in her jail -

in an iron belt and mask,
of lifelong chastity,
so here's more of my story,
of my submissive history -

When we finished masturbating,
I followed Lily home,
My dick was like a stick,
HARDER than a bone.

She led me to her tub,
and shaved off all my hair!
And held up a small mirror,
O NO,  my balls were bare.

Then she said she had to pee,
as she stood above my face,
pulled her lips apart,
and gave me a sweet taste -

of the nectar from the petals,
of her pink and puffy flower,
which is how I learned to love,
Miss Lily's golden shower.

She left me where I was,
and summoned all her friends,
for our tale was very young,
and I had to make amends -

for missing a few drops,
of her cum and pee,
and before the night was done,
she'd put her brand on me.


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  • Oh no.. you are branded.. no fair, I want my brand on you. For you are such a naughty boy, that makes the ladies sway, and they are all heading your way.


  • Umm Mouth is watering..
    still can't talk, tongue is twisted, shame on you.
    This is HOT, i can see the flames and smoke lingering.
    Geezus!
    Loved it!
    -Mandi


  • hotchocolate gold member
    April 30

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    This is great loved what you did here! You are so naughty LOL!

    Then she said she had to pee,
    as she stood above my face,
    pulled her lips apart,
    and gave me a sweet taste

  • fired up and blown away
    reaching to extreme heights
    loving it


  • -Ang-
    April 28
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    lol, well done

    ang


  • Lonesome Dove
    April 19

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    Mmhhhh very hot indeed. I'm loving your writing I must say... blushes.... I'll be diggin a little deeper... *grins. Thank you for sharing.

    btw... second last sentence in second last stanza has the word was repeated.

    grrrrrrreat poem!!

  • LMAO indeed Earl you always get me hot and bothered.
    I am definately in need of some release..now, stop this madness and get Mistress Passions a piece will ya??? You may not be at home in the lair but damn dont take me writes away lol

    Love
    Passions

    Thumbs up fingers down!


  • Always Deena
    April 14

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    A fine bit of history here, nice to know the "Lust Story" behind you & your Lilly~ she is a fine Wench. You are very lucky to enjoy her juices.
    Deena


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    April 14

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    More heat on Pet's Island
    such a saucy piece indeed
    Loved it hun
    thanks for sharing
    Julie


  • Riftkin gold member
    April 13

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    Oh, Earl you are a very naughty pet.. and you know your Mistresses demand the most out of you. Each one of them will want more and more from a bad .. bad pet like you.


  • onesugar gold member
    April 13

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    Seems ya not the only one enjoying them LOL!!!There is nothing like a golden shower to get you all WET! Loved it baby. Keep them cumming love
    Love you HOT ASS! Chelle xxx


  • Jaded Lily gold member
    April 13

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    Wow, I'm astonished! I didn't realize I made such an impact on you that evening lol I'm glad to see that you are happy with your MISTRESS. I have big plans for us...BIG plans. hehe I really liked this piece and look forward to more of your pieces my wonderful pet. I love to read what you write!
    Love and kisses,
    MISTRESS


  • maralisa silver member
    April 13

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    oh my a hot and steamy adventure earl thank you for sharing your spicy poem my friend take care maralisa


  • estbelle gold member
    April 12
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    this is sweet and naughty but good good good


  • Draig aine gold member
    April 12
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    still humming

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