You've ripped apart my heart and soul,
You've drained my veins, the blood runs cold.
My eyes, they cry, their bloodshot red,
Your gain, my pain, my emotions instead.
Did you think, I would sink to the level you play?
How did you know, how low I would fall at your say?
You captured and fractured the last piece of my soul,
You lured and you tortured all my self control.
Now I bid you forwell, with my wrists crimson shade,
And I Rid of this world, my last feelings betrayed.
A contest entry
- Lets get soem pain out by Stolen memories.
1000 points, ended May 4, 42 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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WOW
Amazing I love the hidden rhymes in it, wow, I'm usually very critical but by all means I can't find much wrong with this.
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Very heartfelt. EXCELLENT WRITE!
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