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Wounds

But these wounds
just don’t seem to heal
And maybe,
just maybe,
if you stopped ripping them open
with your deceitful eyes,
and your sweet, sweet lies,
they’d have even the slightest chance

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  • Sgt. Pepper
    April 12, 2009

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    OMG.
    this poem just ripped out my heart, and tore it up with each word,
    the room has suddenly gone cold.
    i love this so much
    thank you!x