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© My Love for Her ~h~

A soul of God’s makeup and will, never truly at peace
Like a wild animal caged waiting to be released
It got free, now terrorizing the world
Nothing seems to tame it, a lost entity of God’s plan
But there it sees a glimmer of light
A woman of Eve, of God
Long ago sent to this life, paths crossed
The beast is tamed, the beast is at peace
The glimmer, the angel is taken away
The broken heart that was named beast
Slashes at life, cursing the pain inside
Only feeling peace from that soul it use to hold dear
Skies crash and fall all around, the stars still hold their place above
A star without a sky is like a body without a soul
That is what I feel without her….
Longing for love and family
My soul and heart, the beast within only loves her
Knowing what to do, only needing a chance
To only want ONE thing in this world
How many of us can say that
One thing, love is everything
Love is God, Christ, Faith, Peace, Hope, Sacrifice, Loyalty, etc..
Love is all that God required, love is the essence of all life
Love is what holds this world together, for love is in all I have named in the previous
The beast is I, and the angel is her….. My love,
You mean more to me than what evil has allowed you to see
Time’s requiem is all I have
All I needed to prove to you
Tiny ambitions of slumbering hopes
Like nature on its course, well so am I
The day we met, WE are still here
Son of Adam, daughter of Eve
We are the plan, it is YOU I love
Love is enough
Love is all we need
Nothing worth it, ever comes easy
But in the end, the sanctuary of salvation
Is much deserved
Don’t go again…. I proudly say to the world, I love you

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  • i love it. damn!!!!

  • pearlstp
    April 15
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    Touching

    Like a 2 winged creature hold her gently with your kind thoughts and if she escapes may her beauty (fond memories only) remain. My dearest AP brother remember, Love is an active and Holy principle that causes love to flourish and remain. I like this love expression to the object of your affection. Line 36-37 Nothing.............but.....sanctuary...salvation GLORY


  • perfectsunset gold member
    April 13
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    Wow, was this ever deeply
    empowering and heartfelt.
    So much emotion woven in
    your words, full of true love
    and spiritual values. This was
    so beautifully crafted. I love
    how you included God in this,
    and that without His love,
    we aren't able to love another.
    But with it, we can move mountains.

    Wonderful take on the prompt!

    Thanks for entering