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a lost emotion


What is it I see when I look into your eyes?

The stars could not shine as bright

The sun is far to dim and the moon is to pale


Perhaps another galaxy untouched by soiled hands

Or the love that is swelling with in

No man in this world could feel this way in any time or place


No fairer maiden hath any man held as the maiden who has deemed my arms fit to hold her


She beckons to my heart with every waking hour for in my dreams is where she consumes me


And I love you more then the morning dew that clings to the rose pedals in the first rays of light that begin the day

For you are my rose and I shall be the dew that clings to you and when your rays of light come I shall be yours forever


I vow this day upon this spot with blood crimson and thick

That forever is not nearly enough time to be with you

For this day forward Eternity will be ours and together we shall reign I as your king and you as my queen

No hand shall falter this vow even the gods themselves could not break this bond

for I shall be the one that holds you next to their heart and with every beat my love shall grow like doves on a wing soaring into the blank sky for nothing is here except for you


Forever and a day there shall be with you in my arms only then shall I be free.

Consumed by your love engulfed in bliss all these things only you can give

Take me now to the temple of your soul where I can walk on the streets of gold

Where sorrow never rests and pain can not invade

Only the caress of your hands and the penetrating love that you give

Your eyes look on me with favor and I can not stand for when I am around you my knees grow weak

You are the pillar that holds up my world and with a smile you send me into places I never knew exist

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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 12

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    This is such a excellent love poem I loved it. This is wonderfully wrtitten.. Isn't it a wonderful feeling to be in love?