What is it I see when I look into your eyes?
The stars could not shine as bright
The sun is far to dim and the moon is to pale
Perhaps another galaxy untouched by soiled hands
Or the love that is swelling with in
No man in this world could feel this way in any time or place
No fairer maiden hath any man held as the maiden who has deemed my arms fit to hold her
She beckons to my heart with every waking hour for in my dreams is where she consumes me
And I love you more then the morning dew that clings to the rose pedals in the first rays of light that begin the day
For you are my rose and I shall be the dew that clings to you and when your rays of light come I shall be yours forever
I vow this day upon this spot with blood crimson and thick
That forever is not nearly enough time to be with you
For this day forward Eternity will be ours and together we shall reign I as your king and you as my queen
No hand shall falter this vow even the gods themselves could not break this bond
for I shall be the one that holds you next to their heart and with every beat my love shall grow like doves on a wing soaring into the blank sky for nothing is here except for you
Forever and a day there shall be with you in my arms only then shall I be free.
Consumed by your love engulfed in bliss all these things only you can give
Take me now to the temple of your soul where I can walk on the streets of gold
Where sorrow never rests and pain can not invade
Only the caress of your hands and the penetrating love that you give
Your eyes look on me with favor and I can not stand for when I am around you my knees grow weak
You are the pillar that holds up my world and with a smile you send me into places I never knew exist
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is such a excellent love poem I loved it. This is wonderfully wrtitten.. Isn't it a wonderful feeling to be in love?
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maybe it was at one time..... I know not what it is now
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