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Easter Journey

Easter bunny springs
from eggs to children and kings
of the Lord above

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  • Peteskid gold member
    July 11
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    very nice the rhyme adds to flow...PK


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 13

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    You have a very nice poem here. I love the way you did it in 3 lines but it does have a lot of meaning. It was a [ple to rad.


  • individuality gold member
    April 13

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    i was dreaming of easter eggs lol the other night i can rememeber bits of it, digging up chocolate, i woke up happy


  • azure85 gold member
    April 12
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    Easter bunny springs
    from eggs to children and kings
    of the Lord above

    Then joy of Easter, and the blessed bunny to jump for joy before the Lord of all. Thank you for such a wonderful haiku about Easter.