Your love is like a lightning bolt
Beautifully powerful, electric
Like a brooding Colt,
Unexpectedly eclectic
Your love is tall and bright and warm
But terribly destructive
All the power focused on one spot
Your body capable of death but also reproduction
Few things here on earth I fear
But you embody all of them
Loss and pain and death in vain
You kill all that I am
Strike me down, here and now
Don't hold me in suspence
I can see you comming for me
A light from heaven sent
Author notes
I just used the picture for inspiration, i hope you enjoy...
A contest entry
- "lightning crash" by JinSays.
906 points, ended April 17, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nice write. I like where you took the prompt, and like the rhyming. Best of luck in the contest (if it has not been judged yet.)
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I did enjoy. Thank you for taking the time to enter, and watch out for Tory, she;s after you
Love,
jin
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lol thanks jin, good contest!
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hey im coming for your sweetie...hope that lightening doesnt burn my ass.
Love
Passions
Loved this piece sweets
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