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Haiku-a-day – 4/12



  bee’s hum
petals- without quiver
                she bares… all


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picture inspired;
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  • Swan song gold member
    April 29
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    another very good entry thank you very much and good luck


  • Nicolette gold member
    April 13
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    loved the innuendo here, especially the "bares all". lovely, lovely haiku, Mal.

    ~ Nicolette


  • Naughtygrlred
    April 12
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    plucked


  • Stardust-luvr
    April 12

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    i love it hun - in such brevity it speaks so much in its mastery deliverance. well done and many blessings always xxx