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WATCHING (for KINKY ADULTS ONLY)

WATCHING (c) Copyright 2009 by Earl F. Hubbard Jr.
(from A NAUGHTY PET'S JOURNAL TOO coming SOON!)

Watching her all night,
Lusting for the prize,
just an inch away,
between her creamy thighs.

Legs up to her ears,
Damn, the girl is HOT
Man, she's walking by,
I don't care if we're caught.

I shoot jizz in my jeans,
when she licks her lips,
I reach into my pants,
to lick my fingertips.

She looks at me and smiles,
and stops to say HELLO,
Looks me up and down,
and moves her hands real slow -

beneath the party dress,
that barely covers her,
Shows me her pink mound,
Winks and calls me Sir.

She lays down on the ground,
and masturbates for me,
I take out my wet cock,
for her eyes to see!

I stroke it up and down,
while she rubs her clit,
and sticks her other hand,
deep inside her slit.

O, how she moans and groans,
humping on the ground,
fisting her wet cunt,
as I stroke up and down -

shooting on her face,
with my legs spread wide!
She's ready to explode,
from somewhere deep inside.

She tells me to get down,
for she's about to squirt,
Then shoots into my mouth,
on my tongue and shirt.

Legs up to her ears,
Damn, the girl is fine!
Her panties in my mouth,
she cries "YOU ARE ALL MINE!".

I'll tell you more tonight,
of our relationship,
but now I am required,
to take an ocean trip.

The ticket has been bought,
to meet and greet my fate,
and MISTRESS will be sad,
if her pride and joy is late.

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  • Now you were not told to mention me in this. For shame on you naughty boy, now I will have to hide my face. But I really did enjoy reading this. You are truly a naughty boy.

  • such a rendezvous this is
    peaches and creams


  • umm drools all over the screenn!
    Dang dude you really have said it all
    here.
    Oh goodness me Yummy. yummy yummy.
    I have got to venture away ,seriously. lol
    mmm.nice write!
    -Mandi

  • Another exceptional piece penned by you
    keep the temps rising

    Good luck

    Passions


  • hotchocolate gold member
    April 30
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    You are so kinky! LOL! Great job loved it

  • excellent
    has the power to start a strong reaction
    fiery wet
    convincing feels real
    easy to relate to


  • -Ang-
    April 28
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    you are totally wicked! i love the way your mind work and how you write

    ang


  • Lonesome Dove
    April 18

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    Very erotic and kinky. Great pace and flow. Your rhyming is magnificent. Thank you for sharing [fans face with hand]. Good luck in the contest.


  • Always Deena
    April 14

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    Oh, how I miss these days...nights...afternoons...

    Deena


  • Riftkin gold member
    April 13

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    This is another from a naughty guy that you are.. and you know how to make it hot and keep it that way.


  • SuZyCuE
    April 13

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    WOW what a hot little piece (of poetry )lol. Your poems really get the juices flowing


    • Swtpoetryman
      April 13
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      EXACTLY, SUZY Q!

      I'm DELIGHTED you enjoyed this.
      Peace & Love!
      Earl.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    April 13

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    What a whip cracker of a poem
    Such sex its flowing..
    wow you are great at these writes
    thanks for sharing and good luck
    Julie


  • estbelle gold member
    April 12

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    you better not be late then for the Mistress... oh that little moment

    Goodluck in the Contest


  • Jaded Lily gold member
    April 12

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    Quite a hot little number and your getting a little on the side I see. That may call for punishment on the high seas. lol Great write and best of luck in the contest my pet.
    Much love, Miss Lily


  • onesugar gold member
    April 12

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    Good luck baby, with this HOT & NAUGHTY piece...there is nothing wrong with a little voyeurism and making the most of a moment..when presented

    Loved it sweet
    Love you Chelle xxx


  • Heavens Child
    April 12

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    Well I don't know if I'm quite that kinky...lol....... but I did enjoy the read. It flows beautifully. Best of luck in the contest!


  • maralisa silver member
    April 12

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    woa this is steamy earl a wonderful your rhyme and flow is beautiful good luck in the contest my friend take care maralisa


  • Draig aine gold member
    April 12
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    phew

    opening the window now, need air!

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