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Beauty

 

 

 

polished marble skin

cherry kissed lips

flaming tresses

 

 

 

natural beauty

vision of the gods

for us mere mortals

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

18 words exactly on

M a g i c

or Picture

Credit to

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g310/silverscent/a3f14dfb3e36f0e037d53663039f024e.jpg

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  • hawkeslake gold member
    May 4

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    Absolutely beautiful, Sue; such brevity, so breath-taking! Lita


    • Sue Cardwell gold member
      May 5
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      Many thanks Lita, I enjoy the challenge of so few words to convey an idea, some times it works, some times it doesn't

      Sue


  • silverscent gold member
    April 17
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    Loved this!! Thanks for entering.

  • Purrsanthema
    April 13

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    well, what I tried to do in my sonnets for the girl with the bay chestnut hair, one of our artists' models, i see you've done in 18 words! good luck in the contest!


    • Sue Cardwell gold member
      April 15
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      Thanks for the comment ... in some ways it might have been easier to write a sonnet about the picture than just 18 words, but it is always a challenge to use less. I'm glad you think I managed it.

      Sue


  • Gigglegasm gold member
    April 12
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    An amazing picture and 18 perfect words!
    Great write!


  • arafura gold member
    April 12
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    Magical!

  • Bad Bill
    April 12
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    18 perfectly-chosen words - best of luck in the contest.

    Good one,
    Bill


  • SomeonesToySoldier gold member
    April 12

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    Oh the beauty in fair skin. great take on the prompt Ms Sue. Good luck in the contest. And I'm sorry but seeing that picture makes me want to see the rest.


    • Sue Cardwell gold member
      April 13
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      Many thanks for your comment and it's obvious fair skinned women are your preference

      Sue


  • RT KatPat
    April 12
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    perfect description ...
    simple poem.

  • Bob Fox
    April 12

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    Yes

    And those visions of God. In the eyes of many always so very beautiful. write on poet and Happy easter.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    April 12

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    Words placed perfectly
    reflecting thoughts and dreams
    happiness and satisfaction
    flowed from the poets pen
    making magic


    Jeff

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