As the swords crash in the air
Making the sound of victory
Courage stands up to the fight
Breaking the bonds of misery
Misery has tried to incamped
All parts of my life
What now does it try to bring
To keep my from excelling
Away away oh trecherous feeling
Alone and despaired
Emotions of the defeated
Like no one has ever cared
Look up brave soldier
Hold the sword tight
For times will come
Where it seems your losing the fight
Press in, press on, press through
You can make it past the mist of fog
That seems to overwhelm you
But not anymore
The victory is in your hand
Dont give up the battle
Because you have won the war
Under the Great King
So will you take your stand
With your sword in your hand
Bravery fighting misery
Because we have the VICTORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author notes
i have read in "Wild at Heart" by John Elderidge and in there John says we are born into a war and to me i see so many people give up when things are going tuff and they think they cant make it but i say you can do it. and the hardest time is not when you are in a bad time but a good one trying to keep that good lifestyle.
what are yur thoughtss on this poem?what sticks out to you
Comments
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This was your best one yet. Seriously.
oh and here:Misery has tried to incamped
it is just encamp. Because the tense doesn't work otherwise.
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