Tonight I want to see your eyes
Just to look at you for another time
I'll remeber all the memories
Something genuine to me
Words only said in a cordial talk
Can never equal what I feel
But where will God guide me to?
For now I just don't know
Walking by another time and just saying hello
Is the only thing from making me run into your arms
Maybe you feel the same
Or is it only a final fantasy?
With simplicity therefore we'll go forward now
Remaining in a field of an ambient sunny day
Rejoicing a time that I had for a moment
A simple warm smile is what I will remember you by
A contest entry
- I don't know how this will go....But.... by DeJaBlue.
700 points, ended April 14, 10 entries
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Comments
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great write. its very simple and holds a realmessage thank you for entering and good luck in the contest
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Very nicely done. Sorrow and longing, well molded to the prompt.
Thanks so much for entering. Good Luck!
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