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Pilgrimage

Although I know there is
life aboard those passing vessels -
brief landings and jolly communiques
notwithstanding, each in its turn
moves on.  I am left to journey
my own solitary seas.



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  • astralshepherd gold member
    April 21

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    how's that old floksong go? You gotta walk that lonesome valley, and you gotta walk, walk it by yourself, Nobody else can walk it for you, You gotta walk, walk it by yourself.

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  • queenie gold member
    April 13

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    this is introspection at its peak. your words power your thoughts and gives a clear insight into the pilgrimage of the journey of life.this is a very profound write and it's what i expect from you. you never stop at the surface. i like the way you go deep.


  • klassy lassy
    April 12

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    Deep thoughts and observations--- sometimes like a ghost ship in the mist. This spoke volumes. So many by-ways to the same port, and we learn to chart our own stars.... ~ Karen