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Last Call

The bars now closed
I made last call
One final drink
To end it all

I pour you now
In a dirty glass
take a bow
You are my last

Collect dust now
Forever and ever
Never come down
End my endeavor

One month free
I finally see clear
I am finally free
From whiskey my dear

*---David B.---*












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One month free of alcohol. I have never felt better. Will never go back.

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  • LostMunkyGi
    April 14

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    Outstanding

    This write had a perfect flow. Your words were well chosen, and um... of course the subject is awesome! Congratulations! That's very exciting.
    ~*~Gi~*~


    • Ds614
      April 14
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      Thank you

      Thank you so much. Yes i am very excited as well. It feels really good.