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Lies and a Painful Soul

Sorrow racks my soul
As i see you fade away
Forever more

"Wait!",  i scream
"I don't want to be left alone..."
But you can't hear my cries

Or my please
I miss you so much
My heart aches in pain

Everyone says it's not my fault
But... I can't bring myself to belive it
It had to be

I was there I could of stopped him
Yet i didn't try hard enough
All the words i said

They meant nothing!
They did nothing
I begged you not to leave me

I know you were in pain, but thats not reason enough
Do you know wat pain i feel?!
How many nights i fall asleep with tears in my eyes?!

No you don't
Cause your blind to anyones pain except yours
You can't see past the end of your own pain

Your slowly killing me
And yet, you don't care
And you always said you would

LIES!!
ALL LIES!!
Your a lier and i'll never believe you ever again!!

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    this was an amazing.
    Just wow.
    Thanks for entering and good luck


  • ShaantSteele
    April 11

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    amazing poem

    it was dark yet beautiful at the same time....im really sorry that this all happened....it did make an amazing story tho