reborn or Reborn?

Heavenly Reborn,
By the love of your heart,
please stir and awaken.

Push the stone from your door, and show us the way.
You have lived for us,

now we shall sing the song of celebration.

Some trust in horses for deliverance to our homes,
but we trust in the name of the Lord our God for deliverance to Home.

Now that you have been There and back,
now that you have lived for another year,
we celebrate and hope for you,

dearest Reborn.

Author notes

Happy Easter and happy birthday to you!!! I use a line from the scripture Ps 20:7 (NIV)"Some trust in chariots and some in horses, but we trust in the name of the Lord our God" for inspiration for the poem. There are also some bible and birthday references. There are some seemingly random capitalized words, but if they are capitalized then that word is meant to represent a name of a person or place.

A contest entry

Contest in Honor of my Sister's Birthday and Easter! by poet360. 700 points, ended April 26, 8 entries
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Cynthia Gaines
April 12
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Beautifully inspiring!!
Good luck in the contest!!
poet360
April 11
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Excellently penned!
Thank you so much for entering this lovely poem! Your inspiration for this poem is awesome. I really really like how you used what her name means in this poem. This poem is so sweet and it makes me feel happy when I read it. She will love this! Great write, and thanks for entering.