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Ashes and Dust

Ashes and dust
Soft reminders of how it all must end
Wiped away from the corner of a lip
and cast into the wind

After all,
We exist
and chase after the wind
Along the way we all get lost
and chase a different route
while the other burns

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  • ccawley gold member
    November 6

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    "wiped away from the corner of a lip" distinct, fresh line.


  • Kal-El
    April 12
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    again perfect