The knowledge of endless generations
is hidden behind the windows of her soul.
Her natural way of life has been denied,
so called, “civilisation”, has taken its toll.
Her heartbeat is in time with the earth’s,
she heeds with reverence, the teachings of old,
with inborn understanding of natures needs
and the tribal stores she has been told.
She wants to feel free, to live the old way,
the pulse of the universe runs in her veins.
Her history has been based on too many lies,
her people are almost shackled in chains.
Deep brown eyes with their golden fleck,
show her passion is barely held in check.
Author notes
option 1: http://evilwerido.deviantart.com/art/Native-American-blood-105156295
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A contest entry
- within thee eyes by HpWICKEDangel.
900 points, ended April 17, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Exquisitely accomplished...
The lament is heard through the lines of "Daughter of the Tribe". I did like this composition for its deep soul's emotions; imagery and subject dealt; and mostly for the message within. A majestic poem.
Much gratitude to the courageous author for sharing this jewel.
Most appreciatively,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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BEAUTIFULLY TOUCHING!!!!!
As I read your lovely words I am reminded of how the white man not only stole the native's land but in doing so destroyed a beautiful and widely range of cultures which were much wiser than the white man's ever was.
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VERY TOUCHING!!!!
Sadly this happened way to often to every tribe throughout the land. Their bravery and sacrifice never faded away though, strength of heart and belief was theirs always.
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A fantastic write that is so worthy of the gold, it is full of hidden emotions and feelings that touch the reader, great job, John
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An exquisite write Sheila , and so true !
As you said : Her natural way of life has been denied
so called , "civilization", has taken it's toll .
A beautiful and thought provoking poem ...
Congratulations on your GOLD , well deserved !!
Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy
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This is an absolutely stunning write that speaks of the yearning for this young girls inner wanting for her old native ways. You spoke with a big voice for her, showing the love and pride of her being. I don't know much about the native Indians except from what I read on here which I think would be closer to reality than what One sees on television. That picture is just so beautiful. If only they could be who they are and return to their tribal ways......Congrats on the gold, much deserved.
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This is so good! I love the emotion, the imagery, and how everything fits together like a puzzle! The writing fits the picture very well, too! I also really like the rhyming scheme! Again, this is beautiful and I love this poem! Great job and congrats on the award!
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Thank you for your very kind comment Coldsummer. I really appreciate you stopping by and taking the time to read.
Sheila
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A lovely written piece, congats on the shiny!!
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Thank you Morning Dove Sheila
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Congratulations on the Golden Chalice!!
Beautifully spoken!! Thank you for sharing your muse's masterwork with all of us!! 
Peace, Love & Hugs, Yellow Moon xx
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Thank you Yellow Moon for your very sweet comment. I really appreciate you stopping by. Sheila
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Beautiful
Very nice poem. The picture goes so well with the words.
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Thank you Little Blue Bird for your very welcome comment. That is a beautiful picture of you and that sweet little miss. Sheila
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This touches the inner me. I love the depth of feelings in this piece. Your last two lines seem to sum up this whole piece making me feel the intensity of her look. Gongrats on the gold. It's well deserved.
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Hi Gypsy, I really must appologise for missing your kind comment on my poem here. I am having to say I am sorry to so many lately, I seem to be missing the notices somehow. Thank you very much. Sheila
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BREATH TAKING
I am so deeply touched by your words of wisdom and truth...i could so easily relate to your words as they seemed to flow right to me...niaish dear LittleMoon for just being you and sharing your breath taking poetry
BIG CONGRATS on the GOLD well earned
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I can't appologise enough for missing this very sweet comment you put here. Thank you so much. I have been missing so many lately I don't know what I am doing wrong. Having too many senior moments or something. Sheila
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Graphically Portrayed
A lovely true perception of the sad history of the much maligned and persecuted native Americans and their
portrayal as brutal savages in the hollywood media
who were driven at the point of a gun to forced repatriation from their native heritage onto barren land without means of subsistence(Those who survived
the long journeys and continuess harassment on the way
that is)only a comparative handfull survived.
But I digress it's a lovely well written poem
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Thank you George for your comment and who could argue the truth of what you say. Maybe it is time for Hollywood to make some new movies to portray closer to the truth. LittleMoon
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This kicks into fruition the thoughts I have held of na htse éme. If all could know the strength your words carry with that respect, it would be completely understandable and show the deepest thoughts she shares with these lines. Simply excellent piece here Little Moon, and deserving of the high award. Niaish for sharing.
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Niaish for your kind words Silent Cougar. I saw that beautiful young womans face and the words wrote themselves. She smolders with inner fire of generations. LittleMoon
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you come very close to the truth and may not know it. This is beautiful.
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I do realise how true this is for many young girls with Native American blood in their veins and I can well understand the reasons why. They walk proud again and so they should. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment aiyana. Sheila
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I think this is my favorite from you...
I love the passion that pours from the page and the sadness that follows it.
As always you blow me away with your imagery and skill for rhyme.
Love it!
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Thank you for your lovely comment on my poem Nicole, I don't know how I missed reading it until tonight. I apologise for that. Sheila
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Awesome as always...
Powerful piece with flawless rhyme & flow in a strong engaging narrative that enthralls throughout...
Congratulations on a well deserved Gold shiny...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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Thank you so much for singing praises to me Fritz, that is a first for me. Hope you enjoy your weekend with whatever you will be doing. Sheila
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Congratulations on the Gold! Tis a powerful write.
I need some recipes for barley...
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Thanks for you comment on this and I have made the correction thank you. Sheila
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This poem oozes with passion. Well done LM and good luck in the contest. Val
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Thank you very much to taking the time to read and comment Val. Sheila
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Wonderful Write
A very lovely yet intense poem. A pleasure to read. Take care my friend.
Hugs and Smiles, Sandy
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Thank you Sandy, always appreciate your kind comments. Sheila
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Bravo!!!!!!
i just love how you turned it. it speaks volumes to know that this could be true. thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
I love how you also matched the background with the browns it all just fits
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