smile one more time
and then never again
ill break your stupid grin
i cant stand to see it
or hear your stupid voice giggling at your immaturity
i just want to rip out your throat
so the laughter goes away
the urge to scream is almost unbearable
i feel like hurting someone
not to bring pain
but to share my anger
about to be unleashed
trying to keep my composure
i bite my lip and clench my fists
god granted you your happiness
my anger was my gift
A contest entry
- Give me Anger and Rage (PW welcome) by TheDemonEve.
900 points, ended April 20, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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The last two lines in this piece are brilliant. If you could manipulate the entire poem to fit that style, no one could come within miles of you. The rest of the poem is unfortunately a little weak. The emotion itself has amazing potential, but the writing is weak and so the emotion is executed poorly. Keep working on this one!!
Best of luck and thanks for entering!
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