In this land of enchantment,
lives a Beauty and the Beast.
To behold her beauty, for the
eyes, a most magnificent feast.
♥
The most coveted of all and
the loveliest ever to be seen,
the one and only of her kind,
she is The Unicorn Queen.
♥
The Elves, Gnomes and Trolls
play Dance of The Fairy for all,
while Beauty and the Beast
dance, by their Magic Waterfall.
♥
When evening must come to an end,
they're Dancing on Moonbeams, to
Somewhere Over The Rainbow, in
The Land Beyond The Stars, a due.
Author notes
By ~ Maxboy
Background By ~ JeannieD Hunter
Prompt ~ The Unicorn Queen [ I couldn't resist using all the titles, they just fit. ]
Image~ http://media.photobucket.com/image/unicorns/vjones60/Unicorns/Unicorn44.jpg?o=40
Note: Dedicated to my lovely wife doolie ♥ My Unicorn Queen.
daviscth Contest #229 ~ It would be an honor, if you would have me as an older brother Cathy.
Gold
In a list
A contest entry
- Fantasy Land (Round 2 of my round series) by Heavenly Angel.
700 points, ended April 25, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PREWRITE MADNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! by Kathraina.
650 points, ended August 15, 456 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - {contest #229} (AP) Family is everything by daviscth.
1750 points, ended June 11, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
~PLEASE COMMENT~
Comments
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The flow is a amazing and the imagery... well the emagery is simply fantastic. This is a wonderful poem. Thank you for this great poem and your entry!
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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The imagery in this is simply delightful. It almost reads like a childrens story. The picture and background really do a lot in bringing your words to life. Congratulations on your golden cup as well. I can see why this won. Thanks for sharing it with me.
I would be delighted to have you as an older brother. You and your darling wife have become very dear to me.
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and allowing me to be part of your family. I think it is just a formality for what we have been to each other all along.
Thanks Sis
Bro
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Aww this is such a beautiful dedication!
Marvelous piece, flawless rhyme and flow throughout. Stunning imagery here as well.
Bravo!
♥ Kate -
love the fantasy feel in this it is a very fasinating poem
The Positives:
great poem I love the imagery and fantasy elements
Room For Improvement:
Nothing I can see you did wonderful
My Favorite Part:
The most coveted of all and
the loveliest ever to be seen,
the one and only of her kind,
she is The Unicorn Queen.
♥
The Elves, Gnomes and Trolls
play Dance of The Fairy for all,
while Beauty and the Beast
dance, by their Magic Waterfall.
That was so wonderful i love it
Overall:
I give this an 8/10 you did great. I hope to see you in my future contests thanks so much for entering.
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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Really lovely. Nice write, pretty picture and stunning background. Sheila
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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lovley write indeed
words and background sublime, a well earned gold trophy indeed, loved the write
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Thank you very much for your beautiful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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A very beautiful write dear poet good luck in the contest
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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Your ending stanza says a lot to me. I liked the flow and I can see why you won a trophy. Great write. I thank you for entering the contest. Unfortunately you've already won a trophy and therefore are being removed from the contest because this breaks the rules. Thanks. kahy
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am very happy you enjoyed my write.
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Magical...
Perfect background!! Wishing you all the best, in all ways!!
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Thank you very much Cyn, I am happy you liked my write, I didn't think I would ever write one that fit this background so well.
Thank You
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Aw, your write is beautiful and enchanting sweetie. Wonderful rhymn and flow. Thank you so much for this lovely dedication Luv.
Wonderful~~~Best wishes in the contest.
Love Ya,
Laura
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You are welcome sweetie, I am happy you enjoyed my write and the dedication.
Love You Too
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excellent
Love this sweetie
Best of luck in the contest
I love the background too
Hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~~
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Thank you so much sweetie for the wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
Thanks Sis
Bro
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A lovely write and presentation. Creative and imaginative. Good flow, rhyme and tone. Nice depth of feeling. A most enjoyable read.
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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Very very nice
I truly enjoyed this piece
Thank you so much for sharing and for being part of the contest
Good luck to you!
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!!! WOW !!!
Thank you so much for the Gold Trophy and your wonderful comment, but most of all, I am very pleased you enjoyed my write.
Thank You Again
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excellent
Love this
Best of luck in the contest
Hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~
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Nothing there yet Sis.
Come back later sweetie.
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