When I see the blue in you,
The love of white binds me through,
And When you're gone, I see red.
Then black I feel, as I lie in bed.
But all at once,
Your dazzling gold opens my eyes
And your warmth of green
brings everlasting sighs.
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this is really good!!!
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:] very creative! It's so beautiful. I love it. I never read anything like it. I loved how you describe the colors with your feelings. You did a amazing job! I don't think I could be this good with colors. My favorite lines would have to be the first 4 lines! They were amazing and it reminds me of how I felt. Keep on writing your talented my dear friend
- Aurora ♥
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wow! this is brilliant, i loved it and i love the colours you used
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I really like the usage of color, but I would like you to have elaborated a little on each color... so it wasn't just a flat color... more alive... you know?
hehe. I don't know.
This is a wonderful write, anyways, darling
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This is actually really lovely, I like the comparisons of colour with with all the feelings.
I really enjoyed reading this one.
Thanks for sharing.
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