life is like ice cream
it likes to melt away
by giving you ups and dwons
challenging you to say
that you are not ok
youre feeling all wrong
but you have to lick it off the way
so it dosent get there again
so keep it from leting it fall
and youll have the most
exciting life
the yummiest icecream!
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Comments
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I liked this poem, very yummy! 'dwons' should be 'downs. Great stuff!
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a very unique point of view
i really liked this poem!!!
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So true.
thanks for entering
good luck. -
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2444065
great poem for my new contest
in author note write we eat ice cream in summer
great idea for a poem
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Wow, really nice. I liked it very much.
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