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Oasis in the Cosmos

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feel little flower
mind with little flower
alien little flower
sprouting here;
lean to moon
reach for moon
pale as moonlight,
wither without moon...

 

Moon flower,
ghost bloom,
tomorrow I shall water you
if you do not eat me first...

flower from the stars,
which star;
wonder...
Happenchanced upon this planet
just as I, perhaps,


we two

an oasis in the cosmos.

 

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

originated from the freewrite exercize Ghost Bloom
by

Rhythm Child

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

planetscape image by Kerem Gogus, alien flower added by me

alien flower image- modified by me from "Alien Flower" by priesteres
www.photoshoptalent.com/photoshop-picture/47fb88fd3df93/Alien-Flower.html

background by me (all part of taking you there...)

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  • Nangaleema
    May 6
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    i liked the rhythm of this piece and the repetition felt lyrical. i enjoyed this.


  • JinSays gold member
    April 13

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    This is a refreshingly different take, and one I enjoyed reading tremendously. Thank you.
    Love,
    jin


    • wbiro gold member
      April 14
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      Thanks for commenting, spurred me to give it a needed go-over... nice sci-fi contest...