cross lost hopes
sweetly resurrected
by an empty tomb
Author notes
May you be blessed this Easter! 
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A contest entry
- Easter-ku by azure85.
700 points, ended April 13, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Can you relate to this?
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very powerful words here...well done...PK
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So comforting...mac
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Such hope and faith within your amazing and beautiful words. You are so gifted with the written word, thanks for sharing. Please telll all my fellow Bandit sisters and brothers that I miss and love them all and hopefully one day I will be back, hugs Theresa
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it is amazing how in simplicity the most powerful messages seem to thusly follow! sweet and endearing this poem breaks the mind of complex thoguhts and reminds us of plebian messages. Wonderful
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Interesting haiku, I like the imagery here for example the double meaning of 'cross'. This was a well written poem but I wonder why you used the word 'sweetly', for me this has interpretations of cuteness for example a child, little old lady (I know that's a bit unpc) or an animal rather than something powerful like Christ's crucifiction, although this is just a personal understanding of the word. In general, this poem is very well written and I can't think of much to critique.
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In few words you bring forth the hope of Easter..Thank you for this hopeful inspirational haiku!
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A very good write and skillfully crafted haiku. Lovely expression of faith and hope. You express the truth of our Lord's resurrection. Well penned and best wishes in the contest.
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Beautiful expression of the meaning of Easter!
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A nice Easter senryu, telling the true meaning!
One remark..... isn't it: resurrected?
Have a blessed Easter! Anna.
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God bless you Brother!
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a good spiritual haiku piece, showing the time with a swift smile and a blessing to all who wander the earth.
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cross lost hopes
sweetly ressurrected
by an empty tomb
What a lovely haiku about the true meaning of Easter, and the scene of the empty tomb. May you have a blessed Easter, thank you so much.
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