eyes focused
on the cup
left behind
a reminder
half full-
never to feel
his lips again
Please tell me what you think
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excellent~
Penned beautiful
But reads so sad
Excellent as always
Hugs
Susan~~~
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its so sad. but i love it
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profound
A very profound and powerful piece about the worst pain a human has to bear.
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Thank you for your comment Robi.
I always appreciate your insight into my words.
Jeannette
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Touching work of poetry. I can feel the sadness as I read it. Thanks for putting this on.
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Thank you for reading and leaving such a nice comment.
Jeannette
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Oh my
How sad! Bless your heart. The pain of loss is so deep and even though it may lessen, it never ends. Hang in there sweet one. 
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You are a sweetie pie my friend. Thanks so much for being a good friend.
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