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Just Be

Always moving
towards a final destination.
I admire your never ending desire,
to be the flame that wont be
snuffed out.
I know what you are

To hell with standing on the sidelines
    watching
                life
                    pass you by
                It is your will to fly!

The strong need to succeed
holds the fire to greatly inspire.

Keep moving..
Keep growing...

I see that spark in your eye.
I'll stand by your side
as your dreams lead you to brighter days.

I realized that my dreams
had started to fade,
but we've got to keep wanting more
from this life.

To reach for the stars
and steal thier light.

To be everything you are...
to be happy
to be free.

To show everyone what it means to BE.

You and I,
We could take on the world together.

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  • first of all you have a great talent and you express and show it well. second awesome word choice and how you explain yourself or the prompt in writing was breathtaking
    thanks for entering

  • i love this piece extremely that way you set it up and expressed the story blew me away.
    welcome to the finalist list