No friends here to see
the pain I suffer. But I
do have one I turn to.
Yes I do.
My friend is always
here with me. When
I'm done I can turn to
my only friend.
See this friend of mine.
Is my razor blade friend.
I use it to slice my wrists.
I feel happy when I use it.
Get mad when I lose it.
When I lose my razor blade
friend. I lose a part of me. For
this friend is the only one who
brings comfort to me. My razor
blade friend.
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A contest entry
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Comments
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Wow!
There is a lot of emotions in this. I like the way you expressed the way you feel! I hope that you do not cut anymore, because there are so many different ways that are more healing. Thank you for sharing. In Love & Light.. Blessed Be!
~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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im sorry but i wasnt really looking for cutting poems unless they show some insanity. i have to dq, but feel free to enter again. Good luck with everything, and i hope that you feel better soon.
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Think of it.Some has got to be crazy to have a razor blade as a friend.
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i know where youre coming from, but i used to have my razor as my friend, and i just dont think of it as insane. i see that you have potential though, so if you want you can either edit this one, or write a new one. let me know
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Wow
You put the feeling of deep depresion very well... Even the way you wrote it reminds me of those shale days. I usually do it through images...And you use punctuation! Beautiful poem!
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well the word usage is a little bland but the metaphors are pretty decent. overall a pretty good write. thank you for entering and good luck in the contest
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we share the same friend.... great write to our dear friend.... thanks for sharing and goood luck in contests.....!
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an atachment to an object that causes you harm, i see a strange twist to it, rather intresting i have to say myself
4/5 for the poem, and 4/5 for the coloring. 4/5 for the message. And a 4/5 for the picture that the poem gives
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aww this is sad, I can relate to the feeling/emotions in this poem thank you so much for entering and I hope things get better for you. No one should have to go through life feeling like this. I should be saying this to myself lol thanks for entering and good luck
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I know of this
through my other young friends. This act though I cannot condone it is an act of pain and loss. The symbolic cutting is a release. I hope that in time you grow away from it. Self multilation is destructive and addictive.
That you can write about it is a healing process and that I applaud you for. All must speak from their heart and understanding.
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I really don't know how to respond to this poem. I just want to say that I can feel your pain coming through your words, and it makes me really sad. I hope your life gets better and better every day.
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I'm sorry
I'm sorry, is all I can say. I know what cutting is like, I know why, so I don't need to ask. This touched me, it's nice to know your not the only person who feels like this. Thank you for sharing such a personal piece with me. Thanks for entering my contest. -
im sorry you feel this way i used to , its hard i know but it gets easyer with time
here if yu need to talk
powerful poem huno -
nice, i can really relate
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... this making me want to cut even more and i don't want to
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Plz don't cut!!!
It's not a good thing!!!
*Cries*
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don't cry *hugs close to me* i'm trying not to
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*Cries!!* I know what it's like to promise someone and how hard it is to not cut when you have the urge. *Cries harder...!!!!!* I had that urge so bad yesterday
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i'm only doing it cause he died wednsday and he always told me i shouldn't cut so i'm doing for him
yeah it sucks not being able to but it was only thing he never liked about me
*hugs you* don't cry hunny
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