I am so in love with you
More than I could ever say
More than I thought was possible
Just...more
I need to have you by my side
Touching me
Kissing me
Loving me
I feel your breath and tremble
Your touch revives me
I know the things I never thought I'd have
But then I awaken
Open my eyes to the reality
You're 1,066 miles away
Too far from my reach
You say you love me
More than life...
More than anything
But two and a half years have gone by
You're still not here
I need you now
My heart is bleeding
My mind is screaming
Please Please Please
Please, just once, let me be enough for someone
Please come home
Author notes
My poem is splendorific .... well, it's not, but she made me say it....
i always turn into a desperate little nothing with these...
Silver in cemetary rose's contest:
allpoetry.com/Contest/518187
Written March 4th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Insert cool title here by Cemetery Rose.
300 points, ended March 14, 2004, 28 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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that is sweet and i have felt that way but now now i dont i have the one
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Distance sucks
I always have trouble writeing about love, because for me I cannot find words to describe it... you did it really well, and I envy you! -
awwww
wow I can relate to this sooo much
it's a horrible feeling waking thinking your beside the one person that means more to you then anything then realizing that their really not there
great poem thou
Take Care -
It was
Silver...
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Awwww this is so bittersweet - I hate the distance thing...hell I tried to date a guy from Jersey when I was in New Hampshire (4 1/2 hr drive) and that only lasted 9 months...(dork was afraid of any kind of commitment) long distance sucks. I feel the pain in your words, wanting to be near the one you love and not being able to - that definitely hurts. I couldn't do it again...but hey, sometimes it works...I didn't read the contest but I think this should have been a winner
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I really liked the first stanza of the poem... "Just more..." very well penned. Thanks for taking the time to comment on my poetry as well! *Sonya*
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you should have one this contest, the others that got trophies, ha i'll be nice...you are the winner in my eyes...
-Stac- -
awwww wow... this is beautiful! You have a unique voice and flow... LOVELY write... I totally understand how you feel.
Trin
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this is a really awesome poem i really likes it has very good emotion in it! /great job
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It's never easy when long distance separates us from the ones we love. A passionate poem that got to me. Good luck in the contest.
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that was an awesome poem. it really sucks to have the person you love be so far away. the poem was very good though, it was beautiful and sweet and i just think it was a great write.
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aww i know it how hard it is to lose someone. i havent lost a gf that faar away but i have had friends move far away. its hard too. I hope everything turns out great for you.
jason -
I don't really no wut 2 say, it was well written, but I'm not really into love. But 4 sum1 who is u can write about it well.
Keep writing, u du got talent.
~Ashley~ -
look at these savages, lol, they love you, and they are eating you up...haha..very nice poem, Eric is so lucky, i hope he knows that..
...keep up the good work...
God bless
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This is so sad, and it really touched me, because it reminds me of a part of my own life, not so much the distance thing, but just being apart from someone I love, and unable to be near him and spend time with him. Beautiful emotion here, great write. ~~Mandy
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brought tears to my eyes
this is soooo amazingly sweet/sad. i've tried the long distance thing too many times, and know how much it can suck. very emotional. great write. -
great content.
great poem and I love the content. like ya background too. -
heart bleeding
awwwwe
Lovely job, pierced my soul! I absolutly love it! Very well done! So sad and you conveyed the emotion well. Thanks for entering!
Peace and love and luck
Susan -
Wow...yes, distance is a killer. But, I guess dont fight what you cant change? This is an awesome peice, I hope you do well in this. Excellently written, its beautiful and very emotional..and I know where youre coming from, I have been in a few situations similar.
~*~blessings~*~
~rora -
i know how u feel. im 1500 miles away from a person ireally care about. i love how the poem flows. keep writng like this its really good
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Makes me want to rekindle old friendships, very emotional. Well done
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