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One Cut

One Cut
One Knife
Thats All it Takes
Why I do it?
I dont know

I guess
Because I'm Stupid
Because I'm Ugly
But really cause I'm Lonely

People don't get it
They don't know what goes on
In my life

The feeling of waking up
Knowing I have no father
to hug me
to kiss me
to tell me that I'm Beutiful
And that he really cares
Knowing I have nothing to live for.

Author notes

I was trying to figure out why I cut one night.
And this is what I came up with.

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  • She burns
    April 10

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    So painful here and very touching, heartfelt words from deep within, all your suffering, it's just so hard and crazy sometimes...

    ...I hope you're feeling okay there today


  • samnessjay
    April 10

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    I get a feeling that I should say sorry when I read this. The last stanza was so sad. I am similar to you in a way and if you ever want to talk I will be here.