Newly awake in a sea full of lies
In which I've been swimming to meet my demise
The curtain around it was just a disguise
The room wasn't holy; it did not arise
To me to feel right, but only like earth
Beastial gaze, to cause nought but birth
It did nothing more to boost my self-worth
There were no results constisting of mirth
My heart runs away, as far west as east
Sickened of treasures I reap from my feast
I am nothing more than the deadliest beast
A lion or lamb, I'll not be released
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Comments
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this is wonderful..really deep and truthfull..
i really liked it, good job :]

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Oh..the confessions and its feeling made this story very strong poetry here my friend..with so much depth and with so much honest truths stated ..well done.,..
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woow



