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VA Deb



I love that woman...

Field nurse
'Nam

Rock solid and fiery as they come

I'll miss that woman





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  • Captain Blackthatch
    April 16

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    Ahoy there! All me dooty to ye squire. This be a right grande poem ye got ‘ere, a right grande ‘un at that. I wish ye a fair wind ever n’ always. I take me leave of ye, arr courses’ll cross again sometime.


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    April 16

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    i must say...it does...catch our curiousity.....
    tell us more....what were curses like,
    smiles, and tastes....what exactly was it about her,
    scent, flavor of speech?

    she sounds like an interesting dame!
    ears/Seattle


  • GotLilt
    April 11
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    Short and sweet!