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Vampire Dreams

I always dreamed of killing you
It's a little goal of mine
So many ways to choice from
Not one of them divine

What if I was a vampire
Made to hunt and kill
Devouring the naughty
It's a game that brings on thrill

I wouldn't just kill you
I'd rip your guts apart
Keeping you awake
long enough to see your heart

Vampires are not impossible
All you have to do is believe
You have been a bad man
I can help relieve

So much built in anger
I've kept in just for you
You can't take them back
They're memories you can't undo

You think you can control me
Fill my past with mistreat
I will let go of all this pain
while biting into your meat

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  • I really like this one, Kristy. The first stanza is the best and the rhyme is actually good.

  • Nice...

    vampires=totally AWESOME/WICKED/KOOL!

  • I liked this one
    thanks for entering and good
    luck.

  • I love vampires and I love revenge! this is a really great write, good imagery and a great flow you are a great writer keep it up!!!