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Which would it be?

A shooting star,
When meets another,
Is an end bizarre
Or a merging of glow
From 'mine' to 'our'.


Thinking of you, I look further
Deep in to a cloudless sky.
As one shooting star meets another
At grave risk, yet ready to try --
I ask myself:
Which way would it be?


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