Driving faster
Engine revving
So close to disaster
Yet can't feel a thing
Till your dead in ditches
Your oh so alive
The gash barely itches
Just barely survive
Gun the gas
music blaring
Shattered glass
Your so daring
Till your dead in ditches
Your oh so alive
Side full of stitches
from laughing to thrive
Breathing is frayed
Yet your still grinning
'Cause you pretend you aren't afraid
Tires spinning
Till your dead in ditches
your oh so alive
Author notes
inspired by dead in ditches- hollywood undead
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2cr9_E5B_xE&NR=1
and practicing driving today
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Nice write and I do like the poem quite a bit. But you are well over the 15 line max. I love your style and the feeling behind your words, but I am a stickler on rules, thats why they were posted. Sorry sweets.
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Sorry, I'm awful with remembering the line count I just kinda eye it and guess >.<
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