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One Last Kiss

Her hand covers her face

All you see are the tears in her eyes between spaces in her fingers, and the scars engraved in her wrist.

The pain called her 'life' has taken her over.

Your all she has, and she can't bare to let you go.

She doesn't know it, but your love for her is deeper than any cut on her.

Her hazel eyes fill with tears, as she knows it's time to go.

'One last kiss' is her final question.

You can't resist.

You pull her in with your arms around her waist, and the two of you share a passionate kiss.

A trigger pulled,

Blood is shed.

Her last moment of happiness,

And now your girl is dead.




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  • i love it!!


  • carebear123
    April 11
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    hummm....insteresting. it shows the pain of life and the joy all at the same time. the kiss was what she wanted but not the life. it shows that the little things in life sometimes to not mask the big picture. sometimes dispite the happy times, the sadness and depression will not go away. it gets the best of some ppl. good write!