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my valentine

secret valentine,
my heart is racing inside,
your so specaial to me,
your one of a kind,
so lets just go,
step outa line,
and go on our own,
lets not wast time,
and move away,
never again stay,
so we move to the farthest bay,
on the sand we lay,
so here we stay,
life is so perfect,
on the risky side,
were lerking,
doing what we want,
having so much fun,
loveing eachother,
so this is for you,
i love you boo <3

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  • omg love this poem


  • Mademokid
    April 11
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    thx all of you

    =) thx for the comments!

  • Awww I love this. It's an awesome write B!!

  • This is beautiful.
    .

  • awwwwz!!!!!! its so sweet!!!! its great!

  • Darling who is this for??
    Great write btw!

  • Mademokid
    April 10
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    thx!

    thx for the comment!! <3


  • Jocelyn.Jaded
    April 10

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    oh my god, this is so sweet (:. I really like it ^.^ it really gives me a picture. "so we move to the farthest bay,
    on the sand we lay,
    so here we stay,
    life is so perfect,
    on the risky side,
    were lerking,
    doing what we want,
    having so much fun," Beautiful lines.

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