An eternity of longing
for those succulent lips
playing in the dark
finally coming to light.
Sensual touches
around the perkiness
your touch
raising a tent.
Flowing, elegant hair
surrounded by wisps of
curtained aromas
an expert pretending to be
an amateur of the night.
Shuddering lightly at
the scent of your breath
sustained and captivated
as the pose comes closer.
The grasp of wanted
expectations
shadow the taste
of unfamiliar territory.
Ignoring the pleas
of how wrong it is
and agreeing with the inner male
of how great it will be.
Loosening the buttons
of a shirt covered in sweat
a vipers lust
so strong and steady.
Photoshoot gone awry
shifting into...
Ignorant adultery
Author notes
Here's another sensual write that I failed epically with. Hope you enjoy it.
Prompt: light vs darkness by ~PB-HASS
In a list
A contest entry
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What do YOU think?
Comments
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very good, i don't think you failed at all, i loved it. it was beautifully put together. it made me image in. thank you for sharing it.
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lol I see no fails except the ending. I don't think it should be ended with ignorant adultery but understand why it has become that. You've done well. thanks for entering the contest and best of luck to you. Kahy
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I see no epic fails here.... only pure sensuality. What a splendid picture it draws in the mind! (And the photograph above it is delicious too...) Excellent. Makes a lady lick her lips.... Best of luck in the contest! Er... contestS.
S
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Failed miserably? HECK NO!
Hold up your head, this was a marvelous write!
I love the sensual edge to this. It's not vulgar in any way, but very tasteful. I love what you've done here. Bravo!
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Wow!! loved this one!!
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Whew!
That was very erotic without being tasteless...I really liked it! It was arousing! And the flow & rhythm was great.
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very nice!
great word choice and sensual.
I likedd this piece very much!
awesome job!
good luck,thanks for entering -
You did a wonderful job with your poem.
There are some great lines within.
Thanks for sharing, be blessed in all you do.
Tony
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LMAO stop saying that you did fine.
A little short yet it held me. Would like to see more but am satisfied with whats here.
Good luck dear one.
Passions
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Shall I make it longer... I think my muse would be up for it.
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*long* is always good. Thats your call
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Muaha, I like how this went afterwards!
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WOW damnnnnnnn
much better!! -
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Thankies Maybe I can write Sensual xD
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