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aquamarine

Your aquamarine eyes wash away
my inhibitions, freeing my heart
from a self devised prison.

Freedom tastes good as my
lips loosen divine ecstasy
from your anxious soul.

A contest entry

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  • Cyanide Dreams
    April 10

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    Oh, nice job. I really enjoyed this. The depth to this is great, and I really liked the imagery. Good job and good luck in the contest.

    Josh


  • February Moon gold member
    April 10
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    This was really well done.